Prologue Moodepac Sea – Far South Dead Zone Boundary Cycle 6002.638.24.5 W The expanse of sea was blanketed in dark clouds. Flashes of lightening revealed the sea’s violent movement. A storm’s tempestuous winds made the sea thrash and rain pelt down. Tom Manson was known as Mean. He was traveling in an amphibious craft throughContinue reading “Extraction Issues 0”
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Time to Try Again
Hello again, the critiquing site was interesting. I knew I had things to fix, I just didn’t realise how many. Sorry about how rough some of the writing is. I got some really helpful feedback and in someways just wanted to rewrite everything before I moved forward again. But I’d better get back into theContinue reading “Time to Try Again”
Thanks Again
Sweet, thanks to all those that read. Thanks to Anthony, Ahaqir, R., Chris Tanisha and Elske. I’ll be sorting writing in a critique website. I probably won’t post much here for a while.
Extraction Issues 24
Chapter 24 Capital City; Yerija BayCycle 6002.6 Executive Lau strolled contentedly down the golden sanded beach. It was a beautiful morning and everything was set to be a delightful day. Finally everything was coming together quickly. It was almost surreal. After struggling to get the capital under control for so long it was an achievementContinue reading “Extraction Issues 24”
Extraction Issues 23
Chapter 23 Cavern Entrance Cycle 6002.64 It was was a messy end to the day on the craft. It had started the false alarm of reactor shielding failure. After this the captain then got busy prepping the crew for movement and once that was underway he took a small group of the crew headed intoContinue reading “Extraction Issues 23”
Extraction Issues 22
Chapter 22 The next morning Negham was in better spirits and loading up the compressed wool of not only the sheep that had been sold, but also of a neighbour with similar size land and an even larger batch from another big farm in the area. It was interesting loading up the cargo, even withContinue reading “Extraction Issues 22”
Extraction Issues 21
Chapter 21 Restricted Maritime Zone BZE:4200.04Cycle 6002.667.09.25 Gil had been surprised that Sihric had suddenly agreed to have the ‘blessing extraction’ ceremony. When she first met him she felt his very identity was in his giants form. Its strength to protect, serve, fight and work for those he cared for. She felt he would alwaysContinue reading “Extraction Issues 21”
Extraction Issue 20
Chapter 20 Mondri Village Cycle 6002.667.08.5W Neodig had nearly been part of proper village life for a week now. The discussions about where he should stay had turned into a weird argument in the village. Some where hoping they could instantly marry him off to Hana, because this definitely would have gotten around the issueContinue reading “Extraction Issue 20”
Update
Hi there thanks to those that are reading despite the writing being at a draft stage. Thanks to Sci-fi, Andrea, Admin, Fox, Frank and Rick for encouragement in the ‘like’ form. At the moment I’m still getting used to a new country, so I will occasionally focus more on volunteering or working on properties orContinue reading “Update”
Extraction Issues 19
Chapter 19 Restricted Maritime Zone BZE:4200.04 Cycle 6002.664.11.5W The next morning Mean had been directed to a spring with a block of soap and towel. He changed into the other clothes Sihric had given him and felt a little better. While he was there he opened up his large bag and fitted the light armour.Continue reading “Extraction Issues 19”