Extraction Issues 1 A4
The team boarding the extractor with Dueliet moved through the airlock in two groups of six. Once outside they re-arranged into groups of four. They headed from the observation platform, down the stairs onto the craft’s secondary arm. With the crates, it had been easier for those in exoskeletons to pull them straight off the…
Extraction Issues 1 A3
Peace on the craft’s bridge was short lived. “What have you incompetent savages done,” Inspector Franklin yelled. Why’d he have to wake up now, Mean wondered. And he seems in an even worse mood. Huh, interesting, he’s got more of an angry wasp vibe now. The inspector was still secured to the anchor points at…
Extraction Issues 1 A2
Dueliet had gathered a group at the larger console table in the operations area. She easily held herself upright despite the crafts continual shaking and calmly projected her voice. She stood at the same height as the engineers standing behind the chairs. She had light, carefully applied make-up on and one of the tidiest uniforms,…
Extraction Issues 1 A1
Approaching Extractor S6 Cycle 6002.638.24.75 W As Mean had continued through the narrow passageways he was relieved to see all the bulkhead and overhead panels were still securely in place. Sticking to the narrow passageways meant there was less room to be thrown around as the craft was shaken again and again. Mean liked the…
Extraction Issues 0
Prologue Moodepac Sea – Far South Dead Zone Boundary Cycle 6002.638.24.5 W The expanse of sea was blanketed in dark clouds. Flashes of lightening revealed the sea’s violent movement. A storm’s tempestuous winds made the sea thrash and rain pelt down. Tom Manson was known as Mean. He was traveling in an amphibious craft through…
Time to Try Again
Hello again, the critiquing site was interesting. I knew I had things to fix, I just didn’t realise how many. Sorry about how rough some of the writing is. I got some really helpful feedback and in someways just wanted to rewrite everything before I moved forward again. But I’d better get back into the…
Thanks Again
Sweet, thanks to all those that read. Thanks to Anthony, Ahaqir, R., Chris Tanisha and Elske. I’ll be sorting writing in a critique website. I probably won’t post much here for a while.
Extraction Issues 24
Chapter 24 Capital City; Yerija BayCycle 6002.6 Executive Lau strolled contentedly down the golden sanded beach. It was a beautiful morning and everything was set to be a delightful day. Finally everything was coming together quickly. It was almost surreal. After struggling to get the capital under control for so long it was an achievement…
Extraction Issues 23
Chapter 23 Cavern Entrance Cycle 6002.64 It was was a messy end to the day on the craft. It had started the false alarm of reactor shielding failure. After this the captain then got busy prepping the crew for movement and once that was underway he took a small group of the crew headed into…
Extraction Issues 22
Chapter 22 The next morning Negham was in better spirits and loading up the compressed wool of not only the sheep that had been sold, but also of a neighbour with similar size land and an even larger batch from another big farm in the area. It was interesting loading up the cargo, even with…
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